Karla Torres November 18, 13
Creative writing
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When I was in Hawaii it was very hot, so me and my friends decided to take a walk by the beach so we could cool down to go out for dinner. Well as the night came, we were actually feeling more relaxed so we got ready and went out. It was around 9 pm. We were 4 in total. As always, we traveled together most of the time. When we got to the restaurant we saw that it was very beautiful and fancy as usual. We saw a couple of celebrities and we got super excited to be over here for vacations. As the night went on with our dinner we went to the movies. At that time “A haunted house” was a new release movie in the theaters.
I have always felt comfortable watching funny movies. I love funny movies since they make me laugh and smile in my bad moments when am sad or something. Yet even though I had my friends with me on vacations I still got another one that couldn’t make it. Since that was the issue I planned that I should buy a present (gift) for my friend. The next morning I gathered all of my friends to go out shopping. They all felt the same way as I do when it comes to shopping. We went to this amazing big mall at the city. We found amazing clothes and shoes.
Of course my purpose to go out shopping was to buy something for my best friend that couldn’t make it to this vacation. As we kept on walking and searching for something special for my best friend I ended up in this place of bunch of jewelry made by hand, which I found very special because it is unique and special. So I was examined each of them and I found the perfect one. As the man was making it I told him to put some letters and words on it.
After shopping we spend our lasts days on Hawaii on the beach. We finally got New York and I saw my best friend, he loved it and thanked me for it. “ It was special like that”
It was interesting to read to your vacation and to see that you had fun
good to know you had a good time on your vacation and that you went to such a nice place like Hawaii.-omari
It was a very interesting story. I liked it cause you left a lot of details which made it fun to read and not boring. I wonder who the gift was for..
– Carlos Barrezueta
grate job